Syphoning Gas Through My Breathing Aparatus.

[Geno]

true shit, thanks for the honesty. i think the criticism i recieve in some of my other works drives me to try different ideas and it always seems to go back into a darker side of me that feels more my own self i.e. ..the dead bodies on the floor.

tried to open in a not so predictable way. a lot of confusion happens when you try to please readers. the thing is, not all the readers feel the same. i guess what really needs to happen is this.. whatever your comfortable with -wherever writing takes. you should go there. dont always change up due to what you criticism leads you to believe may be the way to go. if changing yourself to make someone else happy is what the message delivers, then its probably not the message you should pay most attention to. allthough i do find inspiration in a critique that tells me to vary my writing, i also find the most struggle when i try to do it. this one -just wasnt the route to go. kind of just writing for the sake of writing.

the beginning may not have been me. but the rest most certainly was. thanks