Week 15 contender match: cyph her (2-1) vs. Certain (4-4) \\ Certain wins 7-0

Bladed Thesis · 06-08-2014, 02:02 PM

Overall: Certain. Contrasting styles here but in the end I think Certain's ability to do more with his lines, using them to develop and bridge gaps in his story and wording really stood out. When working with smaller lines in topicals, you really need to be able to still maintain a connection with the reader and not waste time or space. I felt cyph struggled with that in particular, making the most of her lines and really grabbing the reader. In the end, she just didn't consistently make use of her wording to her advantage and that pushed the overall vote to Certain. Topic wise, both had their ups and downs, neither stood out to me as spectacular.

06-08-2014, 02:02 PM	#6
Bladed Thesis ExSol Meets HolyIsh Join Date: Apr 2014 Location: IRL Posts: 148 Battle Record: 4-2 Rep Power: 2127063	Overall: Certain. Contrasting styles here but in the end I think Certain's ability to do more with his lines, using them to develop and bridge gaps in his story and wording really stood out. When working with smaller lines in topicals, you really need to be able to still maintain a connection with the reader and not waste time or space. I felt cyph struggled with that in particular, making the most of her lines and really grabbing the reader. In the end, she just didn't consistently make use of her wording to her advantage and that pushed the overall vote to Certain. Topic wise, both had their ups and downs, neither stood out to me as spectacular. __________________ mere morals fall again, mere mortals stall my blades? ive gone everywhere 'n everywhere gone gotten Hall of Fame