Week 13: 11. Zenland (1-1) vs. 12. cyph her (0-1) \\ cyph her wins 7-1

Vulgar · 05-25-2014, 11:22 PM

cyph her - Conversational tones were felt; an interesting verse. Gentle currents of language were preferred over anything dense. Things read smooth for the most part. One small crit/observation might be a versatility of feelings and sensations. More instances or examples exploring the main theme.

Zenland - Stellar performance of you with little flashiness. You chose to go for personal, character-driven strokes, touching on an overused subject but giving it a homemade glow. It was self explanatory and invoked a decent atmosphere of lovesickness.

My vote goes to cyph her.

05-25-2014, 11:22 PM	#7
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	cyph her - Conversational tones were felt; an interesting verse. Gentle currents of language were preferred over anything dense. Things read smooth for the most part. One small crit/observation might be a versatility of feelings and sensations. More instances or examples exploring the main theme. Zenland - Stellar performance of you with little flashiness. You chose to go for personal, character-driven strokes, touching on an overused subject but giving it a homemade glow. It was self explanatory and invoked a decent atmosphere of lovesickness. My vote goes to cyph her.