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Old 04-06-2014, 09:23 PM   #1
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Wow Split, this was very impressive. The amount of wordplay you had was incredible. Very well thought out lines with a purpose. Also tons of rhyme slanting which was enjoyable, very bragadoccia as you stated. Everything worked together on this and contributed to the overall feel of what I think you were going for. Good display of skill, the booth needs you to write more often in this section. Very good piece, Split.
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