AOWL Week 5: Mike Wrecka (AOWL #1 CONTENDER) (3-1) VS. Adonis (1-0) - ADONIS WINS 8-3

TYSON · 03-18-2013, 07:31 PM

Loved this topic....

Adonis.....NASTY WANKER...got that off my chest. Aside from the major discomfort from your piece I give it an A- for obvious reasons. Very graphic, very emotional and very topic oriented. It was like this piece is why Shakespeare said the qoute in the first place. I refuse to call this dope, I refuse. Lol

Mike wrecka..... thanks for not making me sick. The flow was on point with this. Good story even if I felt I should have been a lil more complex. Kinda seemed simple as far as scheme and vocab go. Personally I would have killed the wife, js. She dead already and I don't want her eating on folk. Mercy kill.

VOTE....Adonis, regrettable. All jokes aside his story and execution was dop*. More gripping and a harder impact. That shock value.

03-18-2013, 07:31 PM	#11
TYSON IN LOVE WITH A STRIPPER Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,967 Battle Record: 10-15 Rep Power: 23089122	Loved this topic.... Adonis.....NASTY WANKER...got that off my chest. Aside from the major discomfort from your piece I give it an A- for obvious reasons. Very graphic, very emotional and very topic oriented. It was like this piece is why Shakespeare said the qoute in the first place. I refuse to call this dope, I refuse. Lol Mike wrecka..... thanks for not making me sick. The flow was on point with this. Good story even if I felt I should have been a lil more complex. Kinda seemed simple as far as scheme and vocab go. Personally I would have killed the wife, js. She dead already and I don't want her eating on folk. Mercy kill. VOTE....Adonis, regrettable. All jokes aside his story and execution was dop*. More gripping and a harder impact. That shock value.