dead man - DELIRIUM

[Certain]

OK, I read it. There's a lot of cool phrasing in this one, along with your patented silky flow. But I think it lacked the thread running through it that I find in your strongest work. There were times when the references were so purposefully vague that it reminded me of Split Eight's writing here. I don't have much more to say, so I'll just quote a few lines I liked.

throwing bricks in lieu of anything constructive to do
poetic waste of a mood. broadband beatnik, sensitive muse
it's expertise. not exercise like english assumed

modus operandi, let the drama resume
i've got nothing left to lose. only coffins to use
and i've realized, it's constant. it's a pang, it's an island
umbrellas for the pain. it's the rain, it's dysthymic

toulouse-lautrec the resurrect. wet corpse of a sketch
metamorphic descendant of some glorious presence
gorged out in western cinema what nordics invented
rhyme contortionist message code allegorical sentence