Week 1: oats vs. Rawn MD \\ oats wins via no-show

oats · 03-01-2014, 12:13 AM

ugh just can't seem to get this done, but for the sake of dropping something on time:

you were.
bigger than physics, chemistry, even simple anatomy
the way you met me, released me from umbilical gravity
your hands embedded me, a bed for me, metaphysical air to breathe
no oxytocin/labored closeness - you were just there for me
you punished me, lectured me, managed the stress
gave me everything you had and then, handled the rest
tangible steps that I stumbled on and stained with my blood
angered you none - concerned only to never leave family bereft
ahead of your time. whenever I was an unfathomable mess
my punishment for trouble was backgammon or chess
that was lesson - think ahead, consider the consequences
prolong attention, pursue the most honest exit

03-01-2014, 12:13 AM	#5
oats Steel Cut Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,084 Battle Record: 19-10 Accomplishments - OM HOF (2x) Champed - Fight Night LXXXIV - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 79005428	ugh just can't seem to get this done, but for the sake of dropping something on time: you were. bigger than physics, chemistry, even simple anatomy the way you met me, released me from umbilical gravity your hands embedded me, a bed for me, metaphysical air to breathe no oxytocin/labored closeness - you were just there for me you punished me, lectured me, managed the stress gave me everything you had and then, handled the rest tangible steps that I stumbled on and stained with my blood angered you none - concerned only to never leave family bereft ahead of your time. whenever I was an unfathomable mess my punishment for trouble was backgammon or chess that was lesson - think ahead, consider the consequences prolong attention, pursue the most honest exit __________________ You should be water