fresh vs Just Write (Topical)- JW WINS BY DQ

[fresh]

@Just Write

[Just Write]

Set the date for one week from today. I got plans with my kid this weekend @Pancake @Certain one of you set a picture or quote topic

[fresh]

so thats the topic.

[Just Write]

Mines ready. Just waiting for you to post bud

[fresh]

there once was a boy named just write
he tied his new shoes up tight
today would be his first day in school
he wanted all the kids to think he was cool
unfortunetly they bullied him every day
threw rocks at his head when he went over to play
things went on like this for mostof his sorry life
now he works in a factory makin plastic forks an knives
one day JW got into a scuffle while out on his break
a little kid made fun of him then punched him in the face
it was unfortunate for JW that he cried his eys out
because he cried so many tears he died after his organs dried out
his funeral was pretty much empty only 4 people came
there were no words but the 5 including the priest spit on his grave

[Just Write]

You'll never understand me, or the mistakes that i've made,
this life is demanding. such a frightening maze.
Cheers to the bastards, plastered, hiding their pain
As for me, i settle for brandy, then start drifting away.

I use to be clever, use to be better,
There was a time when i only toasted on my social endeavors,
Now that my emotions are severed, I can't hold it together
Cause I traded my passion, my family, for 40 ounces of pleasure
Lately I can't even stand me, hopefully that relationship betters,
But progression is lessened when you lack to put forth an effort.
Pour me another glass and i'll pour out my soul. i have no where to go
Gave up a happy home, for a bottle. a cardboard box on the side of the road
Tallie the votes, im still the happiest drunk you could meet.
At least until my alcohol count decreases and ceases to peak.
So Each morning i wake up and drown myself with a bottle of wine
Til i become man enough to put it down and swollow my pride.

[Sharp]

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@fresh @Just Write vote on two battles each and link em here please

[Certain]

Just Write: You actually wrote a good verse to the topic. I liked "Lately I can't even stand me." There were a few too many clichés. But it was good.

fresh: I don't know what that was.

Vote: Just Write

[Just Write]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=52960
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=35852
@Sharp Nine

[fresh]

Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

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@fresh @Just Write vote on two battles each and link em here please

I aint voting on shit. I tried that last time and my battle hasn't been voted on in weeks. This place is a joke, DQ me if you see fit.

[Sharp]

Originally Posted by fresh

I aint voting on shit. I tried that last time and my battle hasn't been voted on in weeks. This place is a joke, DQ me if you see fit.

this is how the ba works

you make a battle, you vote on two battles each. 4 votes total, usually enough to end a battle.

at the moment the BA is slow with a tourney going on inside of it drawing most voters and knocking BA battles down. they are gone for the time being. just vote on two battles

[Just Write]

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=54898

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=51897

Here's 2 more votes to cover his sorry ass

[Dope girl]

Fresh-Bars all over the place, Could have wrote a better verse if spend more time on it.

Vote-JW for batter attempts.

[FloSoIll]

Fresh

work on ur style and expanding ur lines..very basic stuff man read other topicals or writers and see how they use imagery and what not

JW better verse clearly knows what he's doing

MVGT Just Write

[Fig]

Fresh came fresh. His verse was a social statement on the nature of topical verses. Each word danced with reverence in my mind

V/JW

[Sharp]

Just saw the verse haha.. This is pathetic

@Just Write Im just gonna give you the w here. I think this verse would better served in the OM, and hopefully the OM dudes would be cool with letting 2 of your votes count as links especially since I've taken OM feed as voting links(@certain ?). Sorry bout this boss

Btw those 3rd/4th link are good if you're ever tryna topical battle here again, I only take 2 votes per person and if someone comes up short they get an extra loss

[fresh]

why you keep deleting my vote? It was a perfectly valid vote!

[fresh]

non bass playing motha fucka! I challenge you to a bass off!

[Just Write]

@namix, bro this is why he keeps getting fucked with. Shit like this

[fresh]

Originally Posted by Just Write

@namix, bro this is why he keeps getting fucked with. Shit like this

No you guys fucking with me is why im fucking with you. Get your facts straight you rat tailed pidgeon stool motherfucker.

Are you going to accept my bass challenge? We go down in history as first bass off in any rap battle site. Whatdya say?