like a chainsaw.

Dove Dozer · 02-05-2014, 08:19 PM

Everything i spits cursed, verse like a chainsaw
With so much flow as it soothes let the rain pour..
Ya know that its soldier approved, cause i aim for..
Marksman with the motion and grooves, when the flames all..
Liquid.. floatin as smoothe. An insane brawl
In my head, i cope with the blues. Im degranged. y'all probably
Have a stroke from the news.. that my game's on
Lines like the ocean it moves, cause my brain's raw..
Messed up soaked in the hues everyday's all
Good so ill coast and ill cruise, get my blaze on...
always stay focused and couth.. when i was raised wrong..
I never really broke from the truth, but i stay strong..
Same song, superhero's phone booth, paid off..
No one dare say that this motherucker Dave's soft
Im sayin this one time, before im famous..
Ima bring that polished flow thats stainless..

Eviscerate · 02-05-2014, 08:51 PM

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Originally Posted by Dove Dozer

always stay focused and couth.. when i was raised wrong..
I never really broke from the truth, but i stay strong..
the same song, superhero's phone booth, paid off..
No one dare to say that this motherucker daves soft

^dug that section right there. really stood out from the rest.
more of that, and you'd be golden.

stay up

Dove Dozer · 02-06-2014, 01:50 PM

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Originally Posted by Eviscerate

^dug that section right there. really stood out from the rest.
more of that, and you'd be golden.

stay up

Thanks i appreciate the feed.

Dove Dozer · 02-12-2014, 06:32 PM

Any more feed on this?

fresh · 02-12-2014, 06:48 PM

i picture you rapping like fred durst.

Just Write · 02-12-2014, 07:07 PM

I got u when i get home g

Dove Dozer · 02-12-2014, 07:11 PM

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Originally Posted by fresh

i picture you rapping like fred durst.

To be totally honest ive never heard fred durst

fresh · 02-12-2014, 07:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dove Dozer

To be totally honest ive never heard fred durst

like a motha fuckin chainsaw!

he actually kinda sucks but he did collab with redman and methodman. its called n together how by limp bizkit

Dove Dozer · 02-12-2014, 08:15 PM

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Originally Posted by fresh

like a motha fuckin chainsaw!

he actually kinda sucks but he did collab with redman and methodman. its called n together how by limp bizkit

Funny how you say chainsaw.. cause this is part of a song the hook is like this

Dove d with the smoothe flow, like a chainsaw
Like a
Like a chainsaw..

Its pretty catchy. Ill post the song when its done

02-05-2014, 08:19 PM	#1
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,079 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853213	like a chainsaw. Everything i spits cursed, verse like a chainsaw With so much flow as it soothes let the rain pour.. Ya know that its soldier approved, cause i aim for.. Marksman with the motion and grooves, when the flames all.. Liquid.. floatin as smoothe. An insane brawl In my head, i cope with the blues. Im degranged. y'all probably Have a stroke from the news.. that my game's on Lines like the ocean it moves, cause my brain's raw.. Messed up soaked in the hues everyday's all Good so ill coast and ill cruise, get my blaze on... always stay focused and couth.. when i was raised wrong.. I never really broke from the truth, but i stay strong.. Same song, superhero's phone booth, paid off.. No one dare say that this motherucker Dave's soft Im sayin this one time, before im famous.. Ima bring that polished flow thats stainless.. __________________ Last edited by Dove Dozer; 02-13-2014 at 05:53 AM.

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Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,079 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853213	Any more feed on this? __________________

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Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997614	I got u when i get home g __________________

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fresh Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2014 Posts: 302 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 0	i picture you rapping like fred durst.