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Dove Dozer 02-05-2014 08:19 PM

like a chainsaw.
 
Everything i spits cursed, verse like a chainsaw
With so much flow as it soothes let the rain pour..
Ya know that its soldier approved, cause i aim for..
Marksman with the motion and grooves, when the flames all..
Liquid.. floatin as smoothe. An insane brawl
In my head, i cope with the blues. Im degranged. y'all probably
Have a stroke from the news.. that my game's on
Lines like the ocean it moves, cause my brain's raw..
Messed up soaked in the hues everyday's all
Good so ill coast and ill cruise, get my blaze on...
always stay focused and couth.. when i was raised wrong..
I never really broke from the truth, but i stay strong..
Same song, superhero's phone booth, paid off..
No one dare say that this motherucker Dave's soft
Im sayin this one time, before im famous..
Ima bring that polished flow thats stainless..

Eviscerate 02-05-2014 08:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dove Dozer (Post 269013)

always stay focused and couth.. when i was raised wrong..
I never really broke from the truth, but i stay strong..
the same song, superhero's phone booth, paid off..
No one dare to say that this motherucker daves soft


^dug that section right there. really stood out from the rest.
more of that, and you'd be golden.


stay up

Dove Dozer 02-06-2014 01:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eviscerate (Post 269049)
^dug that section right there. really stood out from the rest.
more of that, and you'd be golden.


stay up

Thanks i appreciate the feed.

Dove Dozer 02-12-2014 06:32 PM

Any more feed on this?

fresh 02-12-2014 06:48 PM

i picture you rapping like fred durst.

Just Write 02-12-2014 07:07 PM

I got u when i get home g

Dove Dozer 02-12-2014 07:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fresh (Post 273538)
i picture you rapping like fred durst.

To be totally honest ive never heard fred durst

fresh 02-12-2014 07:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dove Dozer (Post 273550)
To be totally honest ive never heard fred durst

like a motha fuckin chainsaw!

he actually kinda sucks but he did collab with redman and methodman. its called n together how by limp bizkit

Dove Dozer 02-12-2014 08:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by fresh (Post 273578)
like a motha fuckin chainsaw!

he actually kinda sucks but he did collab with redman and methodman. its called n together how by limp bizkit

Funny how you say chainsaw.. cause this is part of a song the hook is like this

Dove d with the smoothe flow, like a chainsaw
Like a
Like a chainsaw..

Its pretty catchy. Ill post the song when its done


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