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02-11-2014, 08:28 AM
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This was alright, nothing special though. The rhyme scheme was pretty cool for the most part. A few spots where I was like "whaat?" because it didn't rhyme or didn't really make sense. I feel like this piece would be more directed towards audio then text but hey thats just me. Decent read, keep elevating.
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