01-21-2014, 10:05 PM | #1 |
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M.D.M.A. (Most Dangerous Man Alive) volume 1
General Tartarus.. I'm a legend that walks the streets
Keep the Heckler in Dhalsim's reach, one swing'll have you pressin on Alt+Delete Got the metal 'cause talk is cheap.. Atlanta season tickets; you catchin the 'Hawks for free I'm carryin weapons from Altered Beast like Solid Snake when he rescued the DARPA Chief An ice cold specimen.. that pine bow stretchin like Tae Bo lessons The nine chrome have you doin plyometrics 'til you fly home headless I'll put you under limestone sediment.. type O-negative rhyme flow specialist Snap on you in a microsecond.. so fast, you're eyes won't catch it Need a psycho sedative to function w/ my brain 'cause I'm fuckin up the game worse than Biogenesis My style's venomous.. your miniature frame get eclipsed by the blade's shadow Fuck extended clips, I got a cinema-grade barrel that'll hit 'em w/ tank shrapnel like pissin off Frank Castle Shotty by the waist.. I ain't fuckin w/ them tranquilizers Talk shit & Big Poppa Pump's flyin off the buckle like a Frankensteiner You're a dead man; circus bizarre.. I murdered the architect Treat y'all like my personal bargain chip & I'm tryna get a burglary charge acquitted All these verses & bars I spit leave a permanent mark like a surgical scar you'd get Doin a vertical arm extension when you swerve in ya car & flip Then get burnt to the darkest crisp like an urban assault surge from an armored Mech Hard black like a permanent marker tip.. Nerd got you laughin 'til that strap pop off, my shit got that Urkel & Carl effect
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01-21-2014, 11:57 PM | #2 |
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Go back to the Mal that Vulgar described. This is cool, but repetitive. Keep posting till you get that groove back.
edit: mightve been a little mean/biased. The personal charge acquitted was nice too.
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01-22-2014, 01:39 AM | #3 |
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Dope. I think your imagination is pretty cool. Shit like this is what im about ta get into. Keep droppin.
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01-22-2014, 06:27 AM | #4 |
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"type O-negative rhyme flow specialist" and "pine bow stretchin like Tae Bo lessons" enjoyed the back to back double rhyme technique parts. Didn't understand the pop-culture reference here "My style's venomous.. your miniature frame get eclipsed by the blade's shadow
Fuck clips, I got a cinema-grade barrel that'll hit 'em w/ tank shrapnel like pissin off Frank Castle" but it was the most interesting and aggressive section. |
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That line's actually supposed to start "Fuck extended clips, I got a cinema-grade barrel" Frank Castle is The Punisher
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01-22-2014, 02:16 PM | #6 |
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dope
seen the frankensteiner line before, and the type o negative thing used by you but the rest is solid the extended clips thing doesnt affect the line to the point we cant get it write moar!
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01-22-2014, 04:46 PM | #7 |
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some pretty witty metas... love the style
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01-22-2014, 05:18 PM | #8 |
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Thought the throw aways were better.
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01-22-2014, 07:23 PM | #9 |
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01-22-2014, 08:53 PM | #10 |
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It's good for what it was... Flow was on point, content was ok, I enjoyed the first half more tbh... Seen frankensteiner line in different variations including battles, solid shit though, puta
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01-22-2014, 11:19 PM | #11 |
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Shit was fire, u stud
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LOL at the additional content. dope as fuck but with a deadman reference it is bound to turn out that way. i don't really get the zyg comparisons etc. this has always been the mode you've run with
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but yeah. overall man this was a pretty great demonstration of your samurai swordsmanship. only a few spots where your rhythm misstepped ill be checking for volume 2 thanks
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01-23-2014, 06:08 PM | #13 |
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Dope. I liked the throw away lines u posted in discussion more tbh. But ya this was flames
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01-23-2014, 06:25 PM | #14 |
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DARPA Chief reference brought me back. Scheming was cool in that line and the Frank castle line as well. Flow was great, but I remember your rhymes being just titch more complex in the past. Nitpicky, still very good. I don't think your throwaway lines were better, necessarily, but they were different than this and maybe a little more interesting. I was expecting a bit more length to the piece due to the way you hyped it up but this was a dope little flex piece, better than most. Feed seems a little more critical than I intended, I usually critique high level writers to a steeper standard. This was better than most drops here.
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01-23-2014, 07:12 PM | #15 |
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this was dope brother. we need to collar goddamnit
I'm just gonna put something nuts together and send it to you for fucking motivation
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