M.D.M.A. (Most Dangerous Man Alive) volume 1
 

General Tartarus.. I'm a legend that walks the streets
Keep the Heckler in Dhalsim's reach, one swing'll have you pressin on Alt+Delete
Got the metal 'cause talk is cheap.. Atlanta season tickets; you catchin the 'Hawks for free
I'm carryin weapons from Altered Beast like Solid Snake when he rescued the DARPA Chief
An ice cold specimen.. that pine bow stretchin like Tae Bo lessons
The nine chrome have you doin plyometrics 'til you fly home headless
I'll put you under limestone sediment.. type O-negative rhyme flow specialist
Snap on you in a microsecond.. so fast, you're eyes won't catch it
Need a psycho sedative to function w/ my brain 'cause I'm fuckin up the game worse than Biogenesis
My style's venomous.. your miniature frame get eclipsed by the blade's shadow
Fuck extended clips, I got a cinema-grade barrel that'll hit 'em w/ tank shrapnel like pissin off Frank Castle
Shotty by the waist.. I ain't fuckin w/ them tranquilizers
Talk shit & Big Poppa Pump's flyin off the buckle like a Frankensteiner
You're a dead man; circus bizarre.. I murdered the architect
Treat y'all like my personal bargain chip & I'm tryna get a burglary charge acquitted
All these verses & bars I spit leave a permanent mark like a surgical scar you'd get
Doin a vertical arm extension when you swerve in ya car & flip
Then get burnt to the darkest crisp like an urban assault surge from an armored Mech
Hard black like a permanent marker tip..
Nerd got you laughin 'til that strap pop off, my shit got that Urkel & Carl effect

Go back to the Mal that Vulgar described. This is cool, but repetitive. Keep posting till you get that groove back.

edit: mightve been a little mean/biased. The personal charge acquitted was nice too.

Dope. I think your imagination is pretty cool. Shit like this is what im about ta get into. Keep droppin.

"type O-negative rhyme flow specialist" and "pine bow stretchin like Tae Bo lessons" enjoyed the back to back double rhyme technique parts. Didn't understand the pop-culture reference here "My style's venomous.. your miniature frame get eclipsed by the blade's shadow
Fuck clips, I got a cinema-grade barrel that'll hit 'em w/ tank shrapnel like pissin off Frank Castle" but it was the most interesting and aggressive section.

Thanks for the feed

That line's actually supposed to start "Fuck extended clips, I got a cinema-grade barrel"

Frank Castle is The Punisher

dope

seen the frankensteiner line before, and the type o negative thing used by you but the rest is solid

the extended clips thing doesnt affect the line to the point we cant get it

write moar!

some pretty witty metas... love the style

Thought the throw aways were better.

@dead man

It's good for what it was... Flow was on point, content was ok, I enjoyed the first half more tbh... Seen frankensteiner line in different variations including battles, solid shit though, puta

Shit was fire, u stud

LOL at the additional content. dope as fuck but with a deadman reference it is bound to turn out that way. i don't really get the zyg comparisons etc. this has always been the mode you've run with

nice. should have been a chicago ref but still cool. next two lines were killer. DARPA chief lotv

had me like.. damn

entire biogenesis bar was also memorable but "psycho sedative" kinda threw it off for me

FUTURIZM

but yeah. overall man this was a pretty great demonstration of your samurai swordsmanship. only a few spots where your rhythm misstepped

ill be checking for volume 2

thanks

Dope. I liked the throw away lines u posted in discussion more tbh. But ya this was flames

DARPA Chief reference brought me back. Scheming was cool in that line and the Frank castle line as well. Flow was great, but I remember your rhymes being just titch more complex in the past. Nitpicky, still very good. I don't think your throwaway lines were better, necessarily, but they were different than this and maybe a little more interesting. I was expecting a bit more length to the piece due to the way you hyped it up but this was a dope little flex piece, better than most. Feed seems a little more critical than I intended, I usually critique high level writers to a steeper standard. This was better than most drops here.

this was dope brother. we need to collar goddamnit

I'm just gonna put something nuts together and send it to you for fucking motivation