vs. Alphabet

Unfukwitable · 01-12-2014, 03:15 PM

a N/S verse I just need some good feed back .

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(he tryna make funny music for $?)
Think you'll be paid switchin who you are'n be-ing silly on records
is sucha Dream you'll scream Radio Killa & have a Milian fetish.
a Gunman?,shit! who believe Al a Bust cans with One hand gripped,
Last person you cornered with the iron was supported by your cutman kit.
Being an In the closet textcee gay fag ain't rational,
Plus I doubt ya'll can even call this hoe- Mozart forms a straight classical.
I'll make him go through Inner throbbin til he wish he was In a coffin
So seeing this weak-knight struggle.. ain't His usual mon-fri dinner problems
No need to Beat around the bush... I'm unveiling the arrogance,
like Al.. Gore is my Vice, So I'll put you bitches on the Poll to prove you -PaleIn comparison.
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[Homo's artforms/]

Geno · 01-14-2014, 08:03 PM

lol @ the tags

this was cool man. nothing spectacular. had a smooth read to it though. the style is clean. just think your concepts still need some brushing up on. keep rocking though

Exis · 01-16-2014, 12:14 AM

Title was the best part.

Unfukwitable · 01-18-2014, 06:03 PM

Good looks Gen..
@Exis eat a dick. you just trolling how bout a battle .

Exis · 01-20-2014, 10:57 PM

I'll pic battle you faggot...

01-12-2014, 03:15 PM	#1
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	vs. Alphabet a N/S verse I just need some good feed back . . . . (he tryna make funny music for $?) Think you'll be paid switchin who you are'n be-ing silly on records is sucha Dream you'll scream Radio Killa & have a Milian fetish. a Gunman?,shit! who believe Al a Bust cans with One hand gripped, Last person you cornered with the iron was supported by your cutman kit. Being an In the closet textcee gay fag ain't rational, Plus I doubt ya'll can even call this hoe- Mozart forms a straight classical. I'll make him go through Inner throbbin til he wish he was In a coffin So seeing this weak-knight struggle.. ain't His usual mon-fri dinner problems No need to Beat around the bush... I'm unveiling the arrogance, like Al.. Gore is my Vice, So I'll put you bitches on the Poll to prove you -PaleIn comparison. . . . [Homo's artforms/]

01-14-2014, 08:03 PM	#2
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	lol @ the tags this was cool man. nothing spectacular. had a smooth read to it though. the style is clean. just think your concepts still need some brushing up on. keep rocking though __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

01-16-2014, 12:14 AM	#3
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Title was the best part.

01-18-2014, 06:03 PM	#4
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	Good looks Gen.. @Exis eat a dick. you just trolling how bout a battle .

01-20-2014, 10:57 PM	#5
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	I'll pic battle you faggot...