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Unfukwitable 01-12-2014 03:15 PM

vs. Alphabet
 
a N/S verse I just need some good feed back .

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(he tryna make funny music for $?)
Think you'll be paid switchin who you are'n be-ing silly on records
is sucha Dream you'll scream Radio Killa & have a Milian fetish.
a Gunman?,shit! who believe Al a Bust cans with One hand gripped,
Last person you cornered with the iron was supported by your cutman kit.
Being an In the closet textcee gay fag ain't rational,
Plus I doubt ya'll can even call this hoe- Mozart forms a straight classical.
I'll make him go through Inner throbbin til he wish he was In a coffin
So seeing this weak-knight struggle.. ain't His usual mon-fri dinner problems
No need to Beat around the bush... I'm unveiling the arrogance,
like Al.. Gore is my Vice, So I'll put you bitches on the Poll to prove you -PaleIn comparison.
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[Homo's artforms/]

Geno 01-14-2014 08:03 PM

lol @ the tags

this was cool man. nothing spectacular. had a smooth read to it though. the style is clean. just think your concepts still need some brushing up on. keep rocking though

Exis 01-16-2014 12:14 AM

Title was the best part.

Unfukwitable 01-18-2014 06:03 PM

Good looks Gen..
@Exis eat a dick. you just trolling how bout a battle .

Exis 01-20-2014 10:57 PM

I'll pic battle you faggot...


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