Alvin Karpis (2-0) vs Greed (2-2) - GREED WINS

Sharp · 01-02-2014, 10:16 PM

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Alvin Karpis · 01-03-2014, 06:13 PM

check neck

Greed · 01-05-2014, 11:19 PM

Sent 20 @Alvin Karpis

Alvin Karpis · 01-07-2014, 05:38 PM

Fuck 20, I'm going 10

10 sent

Alvin Karpis · 01-07-2014, 07:08 PM

Homey, you lost to plot while I’m slaughtering foes
When you sweat they call your neck the watering hole
I already exposed how you got this battle so let’s be fuckin honest
I caught you slippin… a napkin to sharp9 w/ lipstick & ya number on it
Ya rep is sad, you’re depressed cuz even ya best is bad
Plus you’re dumb as a nail, I bet you think Chief keef is my exes dad
& why you change ya name from pryde to greed kid
A deadily Cyn?? pssh you’re just better off no-showing like he did
Head shots w/ the red dots, you won’t even be seeing it fam
I balance beams with my hand, you’re just on balance beams with your hands

Greed · 01-07-2014, 10:45 PM

You're trash
Your notable wins aren't notable, I don't follow your career when you don't deserve one
By the time you beat god of war, I had already beat the 2nd and 3rd one
Half hearted raps were never decent, why else did you think your reps slippin
You actually post so much light work you could have doubled as an electrician
My money make money kid, you ain't yet earned the racks to spend..
when the last time that YOU had a paperwork.... you had to turn that shit in
Really was there ever any quesion on why your girl had to leave tho?
That Indians reservations about you could of started up a casino
Hoes beg to take me down the aisle why am i supposed to be threatened?
After checkout, a PRO'd deuce him based on his grocery sections

KwaL!ty · 01-08-2014, 11:27 AM

Alvin

Bar 1-- hahaha dope play on the whole in his neck fresh flip and definitely hit home..
Bar 2-- ehh nothing really special there cause obviously it didn't happen
Bar 3-- i get this bar but it feels like your blocking instead of swinging like ur preventing him from usingn that on you which doesn't connect on him
Bar 4-- the CYN play I get it but nothing really hitting here just statementish
Bar 5-- again this is no real punch he's on balance beams w his hands ok so he is a gymnast to me that doesn't connect ..

Seen karpis come waaaaaaaaaaaaay better then this .. I'm a littles lost

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Vs
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Greed

Bar 1-- he beat a vet you beat a game..? Where does that connect..?
Bar 2-- ehhh I get it which is kind of played and untrue being the fact I don't think he has lost a battle here even his verse against you was below standards still this is a miss..
Bar 3-- this bar could have been something but the execution wasn't there I like the paper work idea though
Bar4-- I liked this concept but again the execution falls short homie..
Bar 5-- I liked the wordplay the connection was jab worthy this could have been a dope bar though I feel like you rushed

Vote -- Alvin for having the better connection and actually having a quotable bar

Orc · 01-10-2014, 09:33 AM

wana start off by saying this is the best verse i read from Greed in terms of execution and delivery. everything was on point. didn't like Karps verse at all.. very rushed. nothing quoteable. if im completely honest i think Greed won. altho some played shit he tried to think outside the box & switched up his steez. closer was cool.

i think Greed won

Bender · 01-11-2014, 12:46 AM

I already exposed how you got this battle so let’s be fuckin honest
I caught you slippin… a napkin to sharp9 w/ lipstick & ya number on it
Ya rep is sad, you’re depressed cuz even ya best is bad
Plus you’re dumb as a nail, I bet you think Chief keef is my exes dad

vs

Really was there ever any quesion on why your girl had to leave tho?
That Indians reservations about you could of started up a casino
Hoes beg to take me down the aisle why am i supposed to be threatened?
After checkout, a PRO'd deuce him based on his grocery sections

this battle was weird, honestly I have seen Karp come wayyy better I wasn't impressed. Greed actually seemed to have a more solid verse to me. Indian reservation line was better than Chief Keef line.

v/Greed

ill nik-A · 01-11-2014, 07:30 AM

Wtf Karp, I was getting ready to say see u next week, u better than this, greed won man, his attacks were more direct, not what I expected, slipping line was Alvin's best, I liked greeds GOW, casino and produce was cool

Vote greed

CtrlF4 · 01-11-2014, 03:27 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alvin Karpis

Homey, you lost to plot while I’m slaughtering foes
When you sweat they call your neck the watering hole
funny but no
I already exposed how you got this battle so let’s be fuckin honest
I caught you slippin… a napkin to sharp9 w/ lipstick & ya number on it
ok
Ya rep is sad, you’re depressed cuz even ya best is bad
Plus you’re dumb as a nail, I bet you think Chief keef is my exes dad
cool
& why you change ya name from pryde to greed kid
A deadily Cyn?? pssh you’re just better off no-showing like he did
meh
Head shots w/ the red dots, you won’t even be seeing it fam
I balance beams with my hand, you’re just on balance beams with your hands
nah

Quote:

Originally Posted by Greed

You're trash
Your notable wins aren't notable, I don't follow your career when you don't deserve one
By the time you beat god of war, I had already beat the 2nd and 3rd one
funny
Half hearted raps were never decent, why else did you think your reps slippin
You actually post so much light work you could have doubled as an electrician
played
My money make money kid, you ain't yet earned the racks to spend..
when the last time that YOU had a paperwork.... you had to turn that shit in
played
Really was there ever any quesion on why your girl had to leave tho?
That Indians reservations about you could of started up a casino
this was a great concept with ok execution
Hoes beg to take me down the aisle why am i supposed to be threatened?
After checkout, a PRO'd deuce him based on his grocery sections
forced concept

v/karp...chief keef won it and he had cleaner execution of the poor verses

JonTheDon · 01-12-2014, 10:28 AM

Sharp9, chief keef

Vs.

Opener

Blah battle expected way more from karp sharp9 n chief keef were coo greed had the opener would have quote the casino bar coo ass concept but wasn't executed good karp got it

V/karp

StarFaggot · 01-12-2014, 12:22 PM

AK - waterhole line was dope, caught slippin would've been cool with a better setup, now that she's your ex I don't think you should be the one to be making punchlines and this bar was ehh, greed deadly sin was nice concept but just didn't sting, balance beams is ok.

Overall an ok verse, no real bad misses, light stuff.

Greed - first punch has nice delivery but not meaningful, light work is played, paperwork line would've been better had you said your paperwork instead of a, Indian reservations played, last line the wp is forced.

Overall it was ok but a bit played.

Vote:
Alvin Karpis wins this battle. I'll take stupid humor over played stuff in this instance.

King Karaoke · 01-13-2014, 10:15 PM

Hi...

Homey, you lost to plot while I’m slaughtering foes
When you sweat they call your neck the watering hole
Ya rep is sad, you’re depressed cuz even ya best is bad
Plus you’re dumb as a nail, I bet you think Chief keef is my exes dad
& why you change ya name from pryde to greed kid
A deadily Cyn?? pssh you’re just better off no-showing like he did

not a bad verse but it was beatable...
watering hole was funny...

Half hearted raps were never decent, why else did you think your reps slippin
You actually post so much light work you could have doubled as an electrician
My money make money kid, you ain't yet earned the racks to spend..
when the last time that YOU had a paperwork.... you had to turn that shit in
Really was there ever any quesion on why your girl had to leave tho?
That Indians reservations about you could of started up a casino

I agree that is possibly your best verse...
reservation line was the lotb...

This is pretty even but I think Greed edged it with the reservation line...

vote- Greed...

Bye....

Lotto Smirk · 01-14-2014, 08:06 AM

Homey, you lost to plot while I’m slaughtering foes
When you sweat they call your neck the watering hole
& why you change ya name from pryde to greed kid
A deadily Cyn?? pssh you’re just better off no-showing like he did

vs

Half hearted raps were never decent, why else did you think your reps slippin
You actually post so much light work you could have doubled as an electrician
Really was there ever any quesion on why your girl had to leave tho?
That Indians reservations about you could of started up a casino

close battle but i got greed edging it with the indians reservations line was expecting more from karp

v- greed

Unfukwitable · 01-14-2014, 02:45 PM

I already exposed how you got this battle so let’s be fuckin honest
I caught you slippin… a napkin to sharp9 w/ lipstick & ya number on it
Head shots w/ the red dots, you won’t even be seeing it fam
I balance beams with my hand, you’re just on balance beams with your hands

vs

Your notable wins aren't notable, I don't follow your career when you don't deserve one
By the time you beat god of war, I had already beat the 2nd and 3rd one
Half hearted raps were never decent, why else did you think your reps slippin
You actually post so much light work you could have doubled as an electrician

One started off better one ended better but nothing really strong came from this feel like it wasn't either of your best drops v/Greed

01-11-2014, 07:30 AM	#10
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	Wtf Karp, I was getting ready to say see u next week, u better than this, greed won man, his attacks were more direct, not what I expected, slipping line was Alvin's best, I liked greeds GOW, casino and produce was cool Vote greed __________________ Grumpy old man.

01-12-2014, 12:22 PM	#13
StarFaggot Leave you flatlined. Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 5,108 Battle Record: 12-9 Champed - Site Diss 2013 - Tag Team Tournament III Rep Power: 0	AK - waterhole line was dope, caught slippin would've been cool with a better setup, now that she's your ex I don't think you should be the one to be making punchlines and this bar was ehh, greed deadly sin was nice concept but just didn't sting, balance beams is ok. Overall an ok verse, no real bad misses, light stuff. Greed - first punch has nice delivery but not meaningful, light work is played, paperwork line would've been better had you said your paperwork instead of a, Indian reservations played, last line the wp is forced. Overall it was ok but a bit played. Vote: Alvin Karpis wins this battle. I'll take stupid humor over played stuff in this instance. __________________ [B][CENTER][SIZE="5"] It's Aero join me at RAPBATTLES[/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]

01-13-2014, 10:15 PM	#14
King Karaoke Stackin' wins... Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,515 Battle Record: 61-20 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - Survivor Tournament - Netcees Battle League (6x) - Netcees Gimmick Tournament Rep Power: 10353697	Hi... Homey, you lost to plot while I’m slaughtering foes When you sweat they call your neck the watering hole Ya rep is sad, you’re depressed cuz even ya best is bad Plus you’re dumb as a nail, I bet you think Chief keef is my exes dad & why you change ya name from pryde to greed kid A deadily Cyn?? pssh you’re just better off no-showing like he did not a bad verse but it was beatable... watering hole was funny... Half hearted raps were never decent, why else did you think your reps slippin You actually post so much light work you could have doubled as an electrician My money make money kid, you ain't yet earned the racks to spend.. when the last time that YOU had a paperwork.... you had to turn that shit in Really was there ever any quesion on why your girl had to leave tho? That Indians reservations about you could of started up a casino I agree that is possibly your best verse... reservation line was the lotb... This is pretty even but I think Greed edged it with the reservation line... vote- Greed... Bye.... __________________ the Outsiders Orc \| ill nik-A \| Sn00p \| King Karaoke

01-03-2014, 06:13 PM	#2
Alvin Karpis 2020 Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 647 Battle Record: 34-12 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Summer Classic V - Summer Classic IV - NBL Season 7 - BA Swag and Flow - BA Swag & Flow Tournament II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV Rep Power: 4052847	check neck

01-05-2014, 11:19 PM	#3
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	Sent 20 @Alvin Karpis

01-07-2014, 05:38 PM	#4
Alvin Karpis 2020 Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 647 Battle Record: 34-12 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Summer Classic V - Summer Classic IV - NBL Season 7 - BA Swag and Flow - BA Swag & Flow Tournament II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV Rep Power: 4052847	Fuck 20, I'm going 10 10 sent

01-07-2014, 07:08 PM	#5
Alvin Karpis 2020 Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 647 Battle Record: 34-12 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Summer Classic V - Summer Classic IV - NBL Season 7 - BA Swag and Flow - BA Swag & Flow Tournament II - BA Tag - BA Tag Tournament IV Rep Power: 4052847	Homey, you lost to plot while I’m slaughtering foes When you sweat they call your neck the watering hole I already exposed how you got this battle so let’s be fuckin honest I caught you slippin… a napkin to sharp9 w/ lipstick & ya number on it Ya rep is sad, you’re depressed cuz even ya best is bad Plus you’re dumb as a nail, I bet you think Chief keef is my exes dad & why you change ya name from pryde to greed kid A deadily Cyn?? pssh you’re just better off no-showing like he did Head shots w/ the red dots, you won’t even be seeing it fam I balance beams with my hand, you’re just on balance beams with your hands

01-07-2014, 10:45 PM	#6
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,721 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975687	You're trash Your notable wins aren't notable, I don't follow your career when you don't deserve one By the time you beat god of war, I had already beat the 2nd and 3rd one Half hearted raps were never decent, why else did you think your reps slippin You actually post so much light work you could have doubled as an electrician My money make money kid, you ain't yet earned the racks to spend.. when the last time that YOU had a paperwork.... you had to turn that shit in Really was there ever any quesion on why your girl had to leave tho? That Indians reservations about you could of started up a casino Hoes beg to take me down the aisle why am i supposed to be threatened? After checkout, a PRO'd deuce him based on his grocery sections

01-08-2014, 11:27 AM	#7
KwaL!ty Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,170 Battle Record: 21-15 Rep Power: 0	Alvin Bar 1-- hahaha dope play on the whole in his neck fresh flip and definitely hit home.. Bar 2-- ehh nothing really special there cause obviously it didn't happen Bar 3-- i get this bar but it feels like your blocking instead of swinging like ur preventing him from usingn that on you which doesn't connect on him Bar 4-- the CYN play I get it but nothing really hitting here just statementish Bar 5-- again this is no real punch he's on balance beams w his hands ok so he is a gymnast to me that doesn't connect .. Seen karpis come waaaaaaaaaaaaay better then this .. I'm a littles lost ------------------- Vs ------------------- Greed Bar 1-- he beat a vet you beat a game..? Where does that connect..? Bar 2-- ehhh I get it which is kind of played and untrue being the fact I don't think he has lost a battle here even his verse against you was below standards still this is a miss.. Bar 3-- this bar could have been something but the execution wasn't there I like the paper work idea though Bar4-- I liked this concept but again the execution falls short homie.. Bar 5-- I liked the wordplay the connection was jab worthy this could have been a dope bar though I feel like you rushed Vote -- Alvin for having the better connection and actually having a quotable bar

01-10-2014, 09:33 AM	#8
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,163 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899393	wana start off by saying this is the best verse i read from Greed in terms of execution and delivery. everything was on point. didn't like Karps verse at all.. very rushed. nothing quoteable. if im completely honest i think Greed won. altho some played shit he tried to think outside the box & switched up his steez. closer was cool. i think Greed won

01-11-2014, 12:46 AM	#9
Bender Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2013 Location: Upstate NY Posts: 264 Battle Record: 11-5 Rep Power: 146919	I already exposed how you got this battle so let’s be fuckin honest I caught you slippin… a napkin to sharp9 w/ lipstick & ya number on it Ya rep is sad, you’re depressed cuz even ya best is bad Plus you’re dumb as a nail, I bet you think Chief keef is my exes dad vs Really was there ever any quesion on why your girl had to leave tho? That Indians reservations about you could of started up a casino Hoes beg to take me down the aisle why am i supposed to be threatened? After checkout, a PRO'd deuce him based on his grocery sections this battle was weird, honestly I have seen Karp come wayyy better I wasn't impressed. Greed actually seemed to have a more solid verse to me. Indian reservation line was better than Chief Keef line. v/Greed

01-12-2014, 10:28 AM	#12
JonTheDon Royalty Nigga Join Date: Jan 2014 Posts: 67 Battle Record: 0-3 Rep Power: 0	Sharp9, chief keef Vs. Opener Blah battle expected way more from karp sharp9 n chief keef were coo greed had the opener would have quote the casino bar coo ass concept but wasn't executed good karp got it V/karp

01-14-2014, 08:06 AM	#15
Lotto Smirk Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,153 Battle Record: 37-49 Rep Power: 2665833	Homey, you lost to plot while I’m slaughtering foes When you sweat they call your neck the watering hole & why you change ya name from pryde to greed kid A deadily Cyn?? pssh you’re just better off no-showing like he did vs Half hearted raps were never decent, why else did you think your reps slippin You actually post so much light work you could have doubled as an electrician Really was there ever any quesion on why your girl had to leave tho? That Indians reservations about you could of started up a casino close battle but i got greed edging it with the indians reservations line was expecting more from karp v- greed

01-14-2014, 02:45 PM	#16
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,643 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460388	I already exposed how you got this battle so let’s be fuckin honest I caught you slippin… a napkin to sharp9 w/ lipstick & ya number on it Head shots w/ the red dots, you won’t even be seeing it fam I balance beams with my hand, you’re just on balance beams with your hands vs Your notable wins aren't notable, I don't follow your career when you don't deserve one By the time you beat god of war, I had already beat the 2nd and 3rd one Half hearted raps were never decent, why else did you think your reps slippin You actually post so much light work you could have doubled as an electrician One started off better one ended better but nothing really strong came from this feel like it wasn't either of your best drops v/Greed