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Old 01-05-2014, 06:59 PM   #3
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Originally Posted by Genocide View Post
But the kid ain't mean to ruin his night
All she came here to do is live her own beautiful life
She grew up despite the hate and despair
And laughs when people say her life isn't as crazy as thiers
At a young age wanted to run from the storm
And away from her parents who fought just because she was born
Looked at the pouring rain, afraid, tired of being a burden
Feeling the pain, how much could fucking be in one person!?
Her demons were perfect, the curses, and the blood in her veins
Her fathers addictions, and mothers would uncover her fate
^^That's tight.

Not to sound all homo but this is one of those pieces that when I read it the feelin' it gives is a beautiful one...it's effortless to read in other words, what I quoted was nice with it man and around that section was solid.Emotion wise it's hot but with havin' not read part 1 I've obviously picked up with things mid way and can only assume what came before this (I'm almost sure you we link me now lol) so yeah...from what I peeped here alone though shit was dope. Enjoyable stuff bro.

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