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01-05-2014, 06:52 PM
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Razor-thin derision
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Plainer than usual from you, and I say that because it's blunt vs. a little wordplay mixed in like you do sometimes, which complements the storyline and keeps it from getting monotonous. Decent writing here, could be spruced up in certain parts.
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