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Old 01-02-2014, 12:52 PM   #10
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There really isn't any line that I can quote from this battle. It is obvious you are both new to this and you both should focus on landing some punches more. Ammo you're stuff was kinda weird and generic, didn't have the power behind it that it should have. Puma you also had awkward rhyme schemes and focused to much on how it would sound vs punches but you had some slight punches in there even though they weren't that great. You both should keep working on it though. good job.

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