monika,

[Ghost1]

Uve gotten better.....

More coherent from when i remember reading u in the NWL

By more coherent i mean......im not as smart as u....so when u say a bunch if big words back ti back its hard for me to follow......but if u spread them out i can follow by context.....whether im getting smarter (not likely) or ur just learning to play to ur audience a bit better without selling out urself short...this is keagues better then i remember u being.....scheme wise too id say uve definitely elevated.

I dont fuck w the subject matter or tone tho. But mechanically this is good.