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12-21-2013, 03:53 AM
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12-21-2013, 04:05 AM
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all that piece needed was some more line breaks. I thought that piece was super sxc and also metaphorically sound. but maybe not as much as Hide&Seek (it was about Shadow of the Colossus and attached themes srs) if you really wanna cringe at newbie writing, open up my archives.... which i refuse to prune to make myself seem like a good writer EDIT: i freepost like a motherfucker. brb feeding people
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