The Book of Enoch

[Nigma]

The Book of
Enoch

They descended with purpose, perfected entities asserting dense
Molecular murmurs, sure disturbance to our Earth as it rests in its purest
Convection is what stirred the very vessel they herded, we heard that
They were the messages, their words will be dissected to be learned
They weren't expected but emerged in a blaze, the scene was gorgeous
They became the leading forces and our deities of worship
Very patient with the orders were these Angels in Gomorrah
Civilizations reigning global, they were stationed in Atlantis
Scribing myriads of monuments in writing old as Sanskrit
Taught of spirits, sin, and consciousness, it's ominous complexity
Appearing in the darkness as they watched us over centuries
Build pyramids over aquifers to harvest in the energy
Sincere were their accomplishments, our eyes were opened endlessly
A year since they'd been brought to us, horizons darken destiny
Their tyranny and slaughter was appearing in our hardships
It was clearer in it's parts then the veneer that smeared the parchment
Blending fear into our hearts as if our fury was the target
Since it's clear that they had lost us they adhere to an apocalypse
Endearment to our daughters 'till their fathering the cradle
Make superior exalted kin, nostalgia for the ages, It's the call to cages
Homage paid to Amadeus, faulted, faded malt, decay of falling angels............
Saw the rising of the seas and all the slaughtered lives uprooted
As they're lying with our wives beneath us thriving in the lost Bermuda
Newly astral men had planted seeds which will establish family trees
To lead this land completely, the advantages of having seen
And understanding things the modern man just can't compete with
Each unlatching patterns, keep the master thesis out the masses reach
And keep it secret as they're latching leashes on this passive species
Pleading, after these disasters ceased the planted seeds begin to grow
As the citizens explode with growth the clinics paved insane traits
Crafting instruments of stone to clone as mimics to our brainwaves
To create slaves the safe way... Producing laws thats flawed with tricks
They introduced economy and fathered it, locked them into jobs like prison
Politics had spawned and risen positive, accomplished it, a conquered mission
Onwards competence had limits, knowledge of our God's existence
Is abolished, lives in all the hidden Nephalem, evolved with wisdom
Destined Suns live fatherless, The Messengers were called and left
They left us blessed and encouraged, wrestling death, and with fervour
Their vessel is cresting the surface rising upwards, they're ascending with purpose

[Nigma]

Bump, this ones good. You should read it.

[Wise Wiggles]

I read it.

Homage paid to Amadeus, faulted, faded malt, decay of falling angels............

^This was cool. As a whole this piece was a bit on the vague side but what evs.
The opening lines were smooth as well.

[Angkor]

returning feed.

Very creative idea here.

From my understanding of the book of Enoch, it's an (often) inadmissible chapter in the Old Testament. It tells of a prophet who was granted permission to see the full glory of Heaven, lol. The chapter further went to tell of the assistance of the Sons of God (Angels) to mankind, resulting in a whole bunch of civilized advancement. Somewhere along the line, these Sons of God mated with the daughters of man resulting in unholy abominations call Nephilim...lol...a very colorful chapter indeed.

I dug what u did with the crux of that story. Its clear what you were trying to do according to passages like these:

As the citizens explode with growth the clinics paved insane traits
Crafting instruments of stone to clone as mimics to our brainwaves
To create slaves the safe way... Producing laws thats flawed with tricks
They introduced economy and fathered it, locked them into jobs like prison

the comparative examination between Biblical parables and modern society isn't lost here - ultimately asking what the price of economical, political, technological advancement is. Very nice.

Flow was a little uneven imo. Some of the rhymings were a bit stretch (gorgeous/worship). But all in all, this was an enjoyable piece, my dude. salute.

[Angkor]

scratch that gorgeous/worship comment. I see, now, it was a call back thing - 'merged in/worship.

[Vulgar]

They descended with purpose, perfected entities asserting dense
Molecular murmurs, sure disturbance to our Earth as it rests in its purest
Convection is what stirred the very vessel they herded, we heard that
They were the messages, their words will be dissected to be learned
They weren't expected but emerged in a blaze, the scene was gorgeous
They became the leading forces and our deities of worship
Very patient with the orders were these Angels in Gomorrah
^Buttery flow.

Each unlatching patterns, keep the master thesis out the masses reach
And keep it secret as they're latching leashes on this passive species
^Fire.

I liked this, even though the approach was a bit played. You're coming into your own as a writer; make sure you put original spins on this breed of Atlantian alternate history culture, because it's very easy to fall into the typical category. I'd recommend listening to some Masta Buildas on YouTube to gauge where no one has been before. There are so many areas you can get into and spit some philosophy on. Keep writing though, you are getting tough at this.

Keep doing you

[big baby]

Saw the rising of the seas and all the slaughtered lives uprooted
As they're lying with our wives beneath us thriving in the lost Bermuda
Newly astral men had planted seeds which will establish family trees
To lead this land completely, the advantages of having seen

Lost Bermuda was just placed nice and cozy there to satisfy my needs. You write with a certain prose, that can be adjusted in certain areas of writing to exponentially amplify your current itinerary.

[Mael]

They descended with purpose, perfected entities asserting dense
Molecular murmurs, sure disturbance to our Earth as it rests in its purest
Convection is what stirred the very vessel they herded, we heard that
They were the messages, their words will be dissected to be learned
They weren't expected but emerged in a blaze, the scene was gorgeous
They became the leading forces and our deities of worship
Great openener.

Make superior exalted kin, nostalgia for the ages, It's the call to cages
Homage paid to Amadeus, faulted, faded malt, decay of falling angels............
Saw the rising of the seas and all the slaughtered lives uprooted
As they're lying with our wives beneath us thriving in the lost Bermuda
Fire.

Endearment to our daughters 'till their fathering the cradle
Make superior exalted kin, nostalgia for the ages, It's the call to cages

Was this a reference to Genesis where the sons of God gain permission from God to sleep with the daughters of men? Great line.

I haven't read the book of Enoch personally, but I've always had a fascination with angels. I have read the Revelations, though. So yeah, this was an interesting read, and your interpretation of events a joy to engage in. Lots of excellent imagery. Good job on the multis and the interesting rhyme scheme. The overall tone of this piece was informative, yet compelling. Great read, mate. Look forward to more from you.

[Nigma]

The topic of this piece was "First man to meet an alien" and I wrote on an abstract interpretation of The Book of Enoch which told of the arrival of visitors from the skies and the eventual fall of angels who would land and take women, mate with them, and form cross a cross breed known as the nephilim. My take on it was that the half human/half alien bloodline grew into the illuminati. The people who gave the egyptians their technology and crafted the pyramids kinda thing and they still survive with the same beliefs.