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Vulgar · 12-07-2013, 01:55 PM

lol this was cool. Your ending was unique compared to what I'm used to from you. It was making a mockery, but it was also oddly open-minded in tone.

So guess it's time to gloat
OM guys have designed their hope
Stick together
Hoping to live forever
All of a sudden these kids are better
"Oh yea, that shit is clever!"
^Since there are clever writers doing it, I found that this wasn't completely opposed to ALL the writers. It was meant for your intended frienemies, but it came out ambiguously. I liked that.

Another original spin from you, nik.

Keep doing you

12-07-2013, 01:55 PM	#12
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	lol this was cool. Your ending was unique compared to what I'm used to from you. It was making a mockery, but it was also oddly open-minded in tone. So guess it's time to gloat OM guys have designed their hope Stick together Hoping to live forever All of a sudden these kids are better "Oh yea, that shit is clever!" ^Since there are clever writers doing it, I found that this wasn't completely opposed to ALL the writers. It was meant for your intended frienemies, but it came out ambiguously. I liked that. Another original spin from you, nik. Keep doing you