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ill nik-A 11-26-2013 02:50 PM

OM FAMILY FOREVER
 
destined for greatness
impressive yet heinous
test it & hate it...
I bet it's just strenuous
Infectious, abrasive
Bringing tension to haters
So I dare yall to question your maker!
While u garner acceptance
get slaughtered for reference
this is the beating ur mother deflected
I'm gutter, demented
I offer a lecture
Thank me in hell
I'm tougher than pressure
Banking on sales.
But this is reality
Take your possessions
This is my charity
Wait for progression
This is disparity
Fair or not this was written
Share the plot or stick to quittin
Stare at cops with lips for hittin
It’s the same routine,
no one entertains new schemes
so I blame you teens
for lack of originality & novelty
the brain’s too keen
on lames who dream
of parody
then awfully… copy each other.
It’s a shame to see
It's some type of reign you fiend
I'll body these fuckers
Guess I’m way too mean
plus I walk this earth unharmed
put my worth on charms,
so how’ll the sloppy recover?
I can serve y’all hard
but why’d the Godly be bothered?!
I’d rip you nerds apart
as it only takes one word to scar
try & conserve ur hearts,
I dare u to stop me from slaughter.
then observe your parts
getting chopped deep in water.
yea I’m a G till I die
while no one’s believing your lies
see as write
is it cool that this isn’t a paragraph?!?
we, not alike
are u tools' visions embarrassed as
weak gossip types
then say ur lines are dope
the props are tight
& yes all them white
So guess it's time to gloat
OM guys have designed their hope
Stick together
Hoping to live forever
All of a sudden these kids are better
"Oh yea, that shit is clever!"

Zen 11-26-2013 03:03 PM

This was actually pretty entertaining even I'm an "om guy" and this was a slight diss towards me. Still, this was something that I enjoyed.

Split 11-26-2013 03:21 PM

liked the short schemes overall but some of the wording was a lil too sloppy.

we not alike to props are tight was the highlight of it for me


Keep keyin

KwaL!ty 11-26-2013 04:37 PM

@ill nik-A

this got a lol


http://blogdailyherald.com/wp-conten...-thumbs_up.gif

PancakeBrah 11-26-2013 10:58 PM

POW MOTHAFUCKA POW COME UP OFF THAT CHAIN


do you know how to pronounce strenuous?

i have my doubts.

Inno 11-26-2013 11:03 PM

dope shit man...flowed like butter lol

Geno 11-27-2013 09:35 AM

Illmatic. Strenuous worked for me to, btw
Cool flex nik-a.

Certain 11-27-2013 10:42 AM

http://www.howjsay.com/index.php?word=strenuous

Wise Wiggles 11-27-2013 10:45 AM

This shit sucked donkey nuts.

dead man 11-27-2013 10:45 AM

so unique and novel. really awesome bro.

Ghost1 11-27-2013 11:00 AM

Shit was hot.

Vulgar 12-07-2013 01:55 PM

lol this was cool. Your ending was unique compared to what I'm used to from you. It was making a mockery, but it was also oddly open-minded in tone.

So guess it's time to gloat
OM guys have designed their hope
Stick together
Hoping to live forever
All of a sudden these kids are better
"Oh yea, that shit is clever!"
^Since there are clever writers doing it, I found that this wasn't completely opposed to ALL the writers. It was meant for your intended frienemies, but it came out ambiguously. I liked that.

Another original spin from you, nik.

Keep doing you


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