Pandora's Box

[Nigma]

Originally Posted by Split Eight

Really enjoyed this. Have you really been writing since you disappeared? It was tight. Transitions were butter smooth, without the usual tendency people have to telegraph their switches. Felt very natural across the board. Only critique would be that a story-type verse doesn't need to be so dense with detail, you could dial it back and put it small amounts of figurative language and have a similarly tight and clear verse.


good though. Stick around.

Appreciate the read, yeah I been doing just as much writing since I've been gone. Just putting the finishing touches on a verse I've put some effort into so heads up for that.