Stepping Outside of Yourself: Does it require cloning?

Nigma · 12-01-2013, 05:58 PM

Damn man still killing it.

"Some honeycombs are made of hexagrams - onlookers admire its odd beauty
There's a difference between staying alert and being an ant in a food cabinet on guard duty"

Well worded for the complexity of the concept, that can be tough to do this effectively.

Autumn leaves/Buddhist cow bar was dope too.

The whole thing had all the components of a successful Vulgar verse. Depth, vocab, imagery, top notch. Consistently enjoyable throughout, commendable for a verse this size.

12-01-2013, 05:58 PM	#1
Nigma The COAT... Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: BC, Canada Posts: 1,723 Battle Record: 28-20 Champed - Art of Writing League (x3) Rep Power: 4595813	Damn man still killing it. "Some honeycombs are made of hexagrams - onlookers admire its odd beauty There's a difference between staying alert and being an ant in a food cabinet on guard duty" Well worded for the complexity of the concept, that can be tough to do this effectively. Autumn leaves/Buddhist cow bar was dope too. The whole thing had all the components of a successful Vulgar verse. Depth, vocab, imagery, top notch. Consistently enjoyable throughout, commendable for a verse this size. __________________