"Inner Daemon"

[Zen]

Originally Posted by Baron Mynd

http://netcees.co/showpost.php?p=182649&postcount=5

I tried it out in the AOWL back in October, bit of a different layout to the text but the same scheme/style with the:

A...B
A...B
B...C
B...C

I don't think everyone caught how technical it was what I was doing, there's a lot of poly-syllabic rhymers in there, so I tried this broken-down-bar style to maybe emphasise what I was doing?

but that's how the game goes sometimes, you need a league where the experienced writers outweighs the newer guys for them to fully appreciate what you're doing with it

just tryna step my own game up, I can carry a scheme for days but my old text verses simply couldn't be spat to a beat

now I've been recording, I've shortened my bars up a whole lot so that they can while still maintaining that technical difficulty

I'm trying to do the same thing now. What's good for rapping and what's good on here is two completely different things but they both easily to me I think.

Read this a few days ago and just haven't gotten around to dropping feed yet. This was definitely good. Like you said on the surface it appears simple but it is in fact complicated. Nice verse man. I realized the other day you're Brian Bryan and you wrote that McDonald farm verse haha. I'm slow on shit like that. But anyway this was dope. If you get a chance I'd appreciate feed on my om piece Loser. Keep dropping brother.