"Inner Daemon"

Baron Mynd · 11-28-2013, 06:09 AM

http://netcees.co/showpost.php?p=182649&postcount=5

I tried it out in the AOWL back in October, bit of a different layout to the text but the same scheme/style with the:

A...B
A...B
B...C
B...C

I don't think everyone caught how technical it was what I was doing, there's a lot of poly-syllabic rhymers in there, so I tried this broken-down-bar style to maybe emphasise what I was doing?

but that's how the game goes sometimes, you need a league where the experienced writers outweighs the newer guys for them to fully appreciate what you're doing with it

just tryna step my own game up, I can carry a scheme for days but my old text verses simply couldn't be spat to a beat

now I've been recording, I've shortened my bars up a whole lot so that they can while still maintaining that technical difficulty

11-28-2013, 06:09 AM	#6
Baron Mynd PROVEN BITER Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Wolverhampton, England Posts: 285 Rep Power: 0	http://netcees.co/showpost.php?p=182649&postcount=5 I tried it out in the AOWL back in October, bit of a different layout to the text but the same scheme/style with the: A...B A...B B...C B...C I don't think everyone caught how technical it was what I was doing, there's a lot of poly-syllabic rhymers in there, so I tried this broken-down-bar style to maybe emphasise what I was doing? but that's how the game goes sometimes, you need a league where the experienced writers outweighs the newer guys for them to fully appreciate what you're doing with it just tryna step my own game up, I can carry a scheme for days but my old text verses simply couldn't be spat to a beat now I've been recording, I've shortened my bars up a whole lot so that they can while still maintaining that technical difficulty Last edited by Baron Mynd; 11-28-2013 at 06:13 AM.