NBL Verse against Arch

Answer · 11-22-2013, 03:51 PM

Dude noshowed, so I figured I'd post it up here for some feed

Archetype...the self proclaimed RB Front Lines Legend...lol

Weren't you retired? Christ...yall making me beat some old guy
Saw him jump n yell BINGO! which is the 2nd time that his height peaked at 'O-9
Let's play a game, I got a spiked cage w/ his face entrapped
So if it looks like ya seein 'Arch in Saw' - he's on a bed of blades with a Razorback
He went from RB...to Army...we all know he's likely to get hurt
They said they're sendin him to the 'Front Lines' & he started writing a text verse
I'll damage ya whole house when I'm leaving this fuck beaten
& 'send Arch into AWOL' w/ a note to the terrorists like - "seriously, just keep him"
RB rode your dick, but who really thinks he's bringin punches?
You couldn't get a 'show of hands' from NC if they put on a play w/ finger puppets
In ur vids u look like you smellin shit & ya nostrils flare, quit it
Cuz this motherfucker's got a face so scrunchy a bitch could tie up her hair with it
He caught me & his girl in his mobile home goin ass into mouth
I feel bad he saw her 'fucked in the trailer' but so has every1 w/ a brazzers account
Fuckin fake can act like ya hard but youve always been a fraud
I'll grab the strap & 'whip you to mush' quick enough for you to place in the Iditarod

Wise Wiggles · 11-22-2013, 05:12 PM

Meh

dull boy · 11-22-2013, 05:33 PM

Snoozzzzzzze.

Neighbor · 11-22-2013, 06:05 PM

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Originally Posted by dull boy

Snoozzzzzzze.

Wow lol

I thought it had its moments, man

Answer · 11-22-2013, 06:19 PM

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Originally Posted by Wise Ways

Meh

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Originally Posted by dull boy

Snoozzzzzzze.

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Originally Posted by Neighbor

Wow lol

I thought it had its moments, man

Thanks for taking the time to read it, guys. Could you offer some general advice on how you think I could improve/What kind of things I should avoid doing?

Answer · 11-24-2013, 07:24 AM

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11-22-2013, 03:51 PM	#1
Answer He / Him / His Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 1,701 Battle Record: 20-1 Champed - Summer Classic IX - Netcees Battle League - Fight night 15 Rep Power: 14633673	NBL Verse against Arch Dude noshowed, so I figured I'd post it up here for some feed Archetype...the self proclaimed RB Front Lines Legend...lol Weren't you retired? Christ...yall making me beat some old guy Saw him jump n yell BINGO! which is the 2nd time that his height peaked at 'O-9 Let's play a game, I got a spiked cage w/ his face entrapped So if it looks like ya seein 'Arch in Saw' - he's on a bed of blades with a Razorback He went from RB...to Army...we all know he's likely to get hurt They said they're sendin him to the 'Front Lines' & he started writing a text verse I'll damage ya whole house when I'm leaving this fuck beaten & 'send Arch into AWOL' w/ a note to the terrorists like - "seriously, just keep him" RB rode your dick, but who really thinks he's bringin punches? You couldn't get a 'show of hands' from NC if they put on a play w/ finger puppets In ur vids u look like you smellin shit & ya nostrils flare, quit it Cuz this motherfucker's got a face so scrunchy a bitch could tie up her hair with it He caught me & his girl in his mobile home goin ass into mouth I feel bad he saw her 'fucked in the trailer' but so has every1 w/ a brazzers account Fuckin fake can act like ya hard but youve always been a fraud I'll grab the strap & 'whip you to mush' quick enough for you to place in the Iditarod

11-22-2013, 05:12 PM	#2
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11-22-2013, 05:33 PM	#3
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11-24-2013, 07:24 AM	#6
Answer He / Him / His Join Date: Oct 2013 Posts: 1,701 Battle Record: 20-1 Champed - Summer Classic IX - Netcees Battle League - Fight night 15 Rep Power: 14633673	Up