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Answer 11-22-2013 03:51 PM

NBL Verse against Arch
 
Dude noshowed, so I figured I'd post it up here for some feed

Archetype...the self proclaimed RB Front Lines Legend...lol

Weren't you retired? Christ...yall making me beat some old guy
Saw him jump n yell BINGO! which is the 2nd time that his height peaked at 'O-9
Let's play a game, I got a spiked cage w/ his face entrapped
So if it looks like ya seein 'Arch in Saw' - he's on a bed of blades with a Razorback
He went from RB...to Army...we all know he's likely to get hurt
They said they're sendin him to the 'Front Lines' & he started writing a text verse
I'll damage ya whole house when I'm leaving this fuck beaten
& 'send Arch into AWOL' w/ a note to the terrorists like - "seriously, just keep him"
RB rode your dick, but who really thinks he's bringin punches?
You couldn't get a 'show of hands' from NC if they put on a play w/ finger puppets
In ur vids u look like you smellin shit & ya nostrils flare, quit it
Cuz this motherfucker's got a face so scrunchy a bitch could tie up her hair with it
He caught me & his girl in his mobile home goin ass into mouth
I feel bad he saw her 'fucked in the trailer' but so has every1 w/ a brazzers account
Fuckin fake can act like ya hard but youve always been a fraud
I'll grab the strap & 'whip you to mush' quick enough for you to place in the Iditarod

Wise Wiggles 11-22-2013 05:12 PM

Meh

dull boy 11-22-2013 05:33 PM

Snoozzzzzzze.

Neighbor 11-22-2013 06:05 PM

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Originally Posted by dull boy (Post 213488)
Snoozzzzzzze.

Wow lol

I thought it had its moments, man

Answer 11-22-2013 06:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wise Ways (Post 213444)
Meh

Quote:

Originally Posted by dull boy (Post 213488)
Snoozzzzzzze.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Neighbor (Post 213508)
Wow lol

I thought it had its moments, man



Thanks for taking the time to read it, guys. Could you offer some general advice on how you think I could improve/What kind of things I should avoid doing?

Answer 11-24-2013 07:24 AM

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