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11-20-2013, 11:32 PM
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Om
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this was well written, it was just kinda boring. sry. what I found interesting though was how you centered the text, and how it actually helped with the comprehension. the structure also helped in that regard I suppose.
I guess I didnt enjoy the storytelling aspect of this. The ending was statementish.
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