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Mad fucking dangerous.
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Your voice is a bit stilted, but you put content first. I can't say I enjoyed a lot of it because I don't accept Jesus into my heart, but I did enjoy the first five lines of the second stanza (even knowing what you meant by Kierkegaard's final words, which really were more his final work). I thought this was the smoothest writing you offered:
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