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11-11-2013, 04:43 PM
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Didn't really like the first half, seemed rather weird to me and I was left with an ''Wat.. Okay?'' It wasn't bad, just thought it was hella weird, and for it to be that I guess it's cool in some way.. I don't know what to feel about it tbh. It was something else and it wasn't wack, let's just leave it at that.
I thought the second half was dope though. The flow and the stuff you presented had some cool similies. Overall; cool shit. Keep it up.
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