Netcees  

Go Back   Netcees > Vault > Archives > The Netcees archive > The Ultimate Writer I (2013)
Register FAQ Community Calendar Today's Posts Search

User Tag List

 
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Prev Previous Post   Next Post Next
Old 02-22-2013, 03:12 PM   #14
Jah Homie
Member
 
Jah Homie's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 65
Battle Record: 0-4



Rep Power: 38
Jah Homie is on a distinguished road
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by Boredom's Line of the match
u are officially gows bitch, he could have u cleaning pots in his house
so when u get on ur knees for god ur not praying ur taking shots in the mouth
Boredom's personals were great. The punches landed hard at the end of the verse -- and the scheme was above average. Loved the rhyme within the schemes... you were really able to stretch your bars to maximize the format

Quote:
Originally Posted by bleak's line of the match
Stop fronting, you're not showtime. keep it up, n I think Frank'll pop ya.
And that g shit should cease quick. in prison you'd get the Shank, Sinatra.
The long verse was well demonstrated, I feel the rhyme could have been structured better. The name flips were good on a stand alone basis yet the repetitive nature left the punches soft. The concepts were great visually but they weren't cohesive enough

v/Boredom
Jah Homie is offline  
 


Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off

Forum Jump


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 03:35 AM.


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
User Alert System provided by Advanced User Tagging (Lite) - vBulletin Mods & Addons Copyright © 2025 DragonByte Technologies Ltd.
Google+