bleak vs. Boredom {Boredom wins}
 

How many?

doesnt matter

check

Ill be dropping ten tonight

sent 10 to snoop

ext?

dawg we had like almost 2 weeks to write and theres still an hour at least before dead line..

quit fighting with seyance n write 10 lines

You posting today or what @bleak

Yes I'm for sure posting today brah.

Boredom aka Alphabet aka Shank Sinatra

Your lines are dull. tic for tac, n repetition blocked your saving graces.
The only people intrigued by the Alphabet r watching Barney on a daily basis.
Part of the infantry, in back cause you're gay and shoot like a bafoon
How you champ a noob tourney, n still not the best noob in your platoon?
Stop fronting, you're not showtime. keep it up, n I think Frank'll pop ya.
And that g shit should cease quick. in prison you'd get the Shank, Sinatra.
You're a one man army huh? Simply cause you aint seein no friends.
Couldn't imagine Alpha team up unless they're riding Mr. T to the win.
That e thug role is beyond stupid. Me? I send fags into the hearse
In breakdowns, we'll see more 9's to bleak than you're braggin in that verse

u love that smooth jazz when jerkin dudes n for a fag thats great
but ur so quick to blow da horn theres men in philharmonics u make look straight
i'm champin this tourney leavin lames snapped on a gurney, i'm a true giant
so if it's predicted in the mag nothin other than here comes the king sn00p lyin
i'm from times when hens boasted n verses posted had hype dude
now the future of text battling looks bleak..it’s because of faggots like you
u are officially gows bitch, he could have u cleaning pots in his house
so when u get on ur knees for god ur not praying ur taking shots in the mouth
these are raw facts dude, anyone on this site'll leave u stomped fast noob
n if u keep beefing w/ seyance ur family will need to have one to contact u

Your lines are dull. tic for tac, n repetition blocked your saving graces.
The only people intrigued by the Alphabet r watching Barney on a daily basis.
ok
Part of the infantry, in back cause you're gay and shoot like a bafoon
How you champ a noob tourney, n still not the best noob in your platoon?
ok
Stop fronting, you're not showtime. keep it up, n I think Frank'll pop ya.
And that g shit should cease quick. in prison you'd get the Shank, Sinatra.
ok
You're a one man army huh? Simply cause you aint seein no friends.
Couldn't imagine Alpha team up unless they're riding Mr. T to the win.
too many name flips now so this one is a miss for me
That e thug role is beyond stupid. Me? I send fags into the hearse
In breakdowns, we'll see more 9's to bleak than you're braggin in that verse
so so

Over all I felt this drop was a very average and played safe fam. I felt it was consistent but felt that those punches were more like slaps then jaw snapping hooks. You may win on points for landing the jabs but I could feel an exposed chin, you have given him the chance for a smash and grab.

VS

u love that smooth jazz when jerkin dudes n for a fag thats great
but ur so quick to blow da horn theres men in philharmonics u make look straight
lol
i'm champin this tourney leavin lames snapped on a gurney, i'm a true giant
so if it's predicted in the mag nothin other than here comes the king sn00p lyin
Wondered when I would first see one of these - ok nice concept but punch aint hurtin him too much
i'm from times when hens boasted n verses posted had hype dude
now the future of text battling looks bleak..it’s because of faggots like you
certainly on topic with the discussion....but no better then the jabs you just recieved
u are officially gows bitch, he could have u cleaning pots in his house
so when u get on ur knees for god ur not praying ur taking shots in the mouth
lol - liked this
these are raw facts dude, anyone on this site'll leave u stomped fast noob
n if u keep beefing w/ seyance ur family will need to have one to contact u
lol

I liked the personals and the many referrences to present wheeling an dealings... I still think you struggled to land a killer blow but you got alot more lols from me with that

The bells rung and for me its Boredom with the lols

V/Boredom

Boredom's personals were great. The punches landed hard at the end of the verse -- and the scheme was above average. Loved the rhyme within the schemes... you were really able to stretch your bars to maximize the format

The long verse was well demonstrated, I feel the rhyme could have been structured better. The name flips were good on a stand alone basis yet the repetitive nature left the punches soft. The concepts were great visually but they weren't cohesive enough

v/Boredom

More consistent verse overall with harder hits, I'd say boredom got this

V/Boredom

Your lines are dull. tic for tac, n repetition blocked your saving graces.
The only people intrigued by the Alphabet r watching Barney on a daily basis.
ok nameplay,

Part of the infantry, in back cause you're gay and shoot like a bafoon
How you champ a noob tourney, n still not the best noob in your platoon?
lol nice

Stop fronting, you're not showtime. keep it up, n I think Frank'll pop ya.
And that g shit should cease quick. in prison you'd get the Shank, Sinatra.
another nice nameplay

You're a one man army huh? Simply cause you aint seein no friends.
Couldn't imagine Alpha team up unless they're riding Mr. T to the win.
lolol dope

That e thug role is beyond stupid. Me? I send fags into the hearse
In breakdowns, we'll see more 9's to bleak than you're braggin in that verse
ehh


vs


u love that smooth jazz when jerkin dudes n for a fag thats great
but ur so quick to blow da horn theres men in philharmonics u make look straight
nah

i'm champin this tourney leavin lames snapped on a gurney, i'm a true giant
so if it's predicted in the mag nothin other than here comes the king sn00p lyin
iono, its nice but the wording or lack of punctuation fucks it up

i'm from times when hens boasted n verses posted had hype dude
now the future of text battling looks bleak..it’s because of faggots like you
weak nameplay

u are officially gows bitch, he could have u cleaning pots in his house
so when u get on ur knees for god ur not praying ur taking shots in the mouth
lolol ouch

these are raw facts dude, anyone on this site'll leave u stomped fast noob
n if u keep beefing w/ seyance ur family will need to have one to contact u
ok nameplay



yo this was a slick battle, both yall had some nice nameplays
bleak was more consistent with his lines tho. each one had sting
bore was straight but he had a couple that missed, the snoop lion
concept was nice but like i said, something was off and fucked it up
going with bleak on this, more consistent. good battle yall.

vote: bleak

Your lines are dull. tic for tac, n repetition blocked your saving graces.
The only people intrigued by the Alphabet r watching Barney on a daily basis.
Nice/ok
Part of the infantry, in back cause you're gay and shoot like a bafoon
How you champ a noob tourney, n still not the best noob in your platoon?
nah
Stop fronting, you're not showtime. keep it up, n I think Frank'll pop ya.
And that g shit should cease quick. in prison you'd get the Shank, Sinatra.
ok
You're a one man army huh? Simply cause you aint seein no friends.
Couldn't imagine Alpha team up unless they're riding Mr. T to the win.
aha
That e thug role is beyond stupid. Me? I send fags into the hearse
In breakdowns, we'll see more 9's to bleak than you're braggin in that verse
aight i guess

vs


u love that smooth jazz when jerkin dudes n for a fag thats great
but ur so quick to blow da horn theres men in philharmonics u make look straight
ha cool
i'm champin this tourney leavin lames snapped on a gurney, i'm a true giant
so if it's predicted in the mag nothin other than here comes the king sn00p lyin
lol
i'm from times when hens boasted n verses posted had hype dude
now the future of text battling looks bleak..it’s because of faggots like you
ok ok
u are officially gows bitch, he could have u cleaning pots in his house
so when u get on ur knees for god ur not praying ur taking shots in the mouth
this was aight but lol
these are raw facts dude, anyone on this site'll leave u stomped fast noob
n if u keep beefing w/ seyance ur family will need to have one to contact u
really nice, lotb

V/ Boredom

had a better verse overall, and took it with the closer.
Good match

Bleak - everything felt a little to predictable. Alphabet/Barney...Alpha team/Mr.T....the shank and noob tourney lines I didn't like...the 9 line was okay, but even nein/9 lines have been done. Overall, your wording is solid but you need to work on thinking outside the box more. Get at your tutor about that and see what they say.

Boredom - A lot of played concepts, but your verse was a lot more consistent than Bleaks. I enjoyed the text's future looks bleak line the most, but just like bleak you gotta think outside the box more. However, you did a slightly better job than Bleak so that's why you get the W for me.

Vote - Boredom