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Old 11-03-2013, 05:54 PM   #2
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i read this once, i say once cause maybe this requires more than one read, maybe not. but if im not captivated enough by the first read im not really inclined to go ahead & read it a second time...

anyway i didnt like it, didnt hate it, buh aint really nothing in here that i can fuck with from any aspect in honesty, just seems like a whole lotta nothing.

it started off ok, enough to make me read the whole thing, but you said some shit that i just wasnt feeling in the slightest
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an say hail Marys I'll use my tongue when I'm taking the bread
an make my tongue strain to re-frame from
tickling the nuns leg
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I'm paranormal I just freeze or just grab a snorkel
and blow fart bubbles ta eat
like whuuuut!?

wdeva, i read this half-heartedly so i guess take my opinion as such...

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