ADDICTION...NO CONTROL

dead man · 10-27-2013, 07:30 PM

Dude this was really heavy. Idk how factual or autobiographical this verse was but I hurt for you bro. Trust me Ive gone through the sort of place you described. You are in control and you are not a self fulfilling prophecy.

I liked the rhymes and besides a few spelling errors you did a fantastic job of narrating addiction and the hopelessness it brings along. I hope you learn to work through it and become whole again is all i can tell you.

Thanks man.

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10-27-2013, 07:30 PM	#2
dead man living Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 3,485 Battle Record: 33-18 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - AOWL Season 1 - Art of Writing League - AOWL Season 4 - Write Week V - GWL Season 1 Rep Power: 77606679	Dude this was really heavy. Idk how factual or autobiographical this verse was but I hurt for you bro. Trust me Ive gone through the sort of place you described. You are in control and you are not a self fulfilling prophecy. I liked the rhymes and besides a few spelling errors you did a fantastic job of narrating addiction and the hopelessness it brings along. I hope you learn to work through it and become whole again is all i can tell you. Thanks man. 1 __________________ Zack Wicks for president