Swag & Flow (Battle With Blanco)

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Originally Posted by Shogun Dinero

I'm metaphorically a beast.
with a angry rage contained with pain in a daze my brains a force thats full of greed.
I fade away like David Blain once I engrave ur face in ways it makes it horrible to see.
>>if youre gonna do rapidfire multis, they should really be more than two syllables
I'm dishing out major payne like I'm Damon Wayans w/ a razor blade, for a cause I must achieve.
I beat the boss like Ethan Hawke in Training Day with basic state of order in the streets.
>first line was gay, second was ok
A change of pace is forcing u to pleed. You'll need the strength to face - ur oracle will seize.
Once it fades away the more you'll know it seems, that ur just a waste in space - like orbital debris.
>orbital debris was cool
I'm actually havin'..
the perfect day impersonating a person placed to earn the pay of - a prodigy, in mathematics.
While I'm being served a plate of bourbon flavored urban angus from a Turkish waitress - honestly, her ass the fattest.
>i didnt like this
Had u in a nervous state, yet I've turned away from the murder rate of worthless skanks I had to manage.
Now I'd rather capture, a burst of strength in this perfect place I first complained wasn't even half of average.
I'm turnin faces with this urge to rape a perfect asian w/ an act of malice.
& days'll tell, u couldn't save urself - if u were a virgin waiting after marriage.

& that was tragic, faggot.

not awful. some good concepts, but the scheme really got old by the second bar and wasnt that impressive to begin with. edit more, you have some ideas that were mad corny u could have cut (Damon Wayans) and some rhymes that could have been cleaner.

keep keyin