The Light

Mr. J · 10-04-2013, 06:19 PM

This was cool, had a different vibe due to the short line use
not poetic, just...more..expressional...if that's even a word
regardless I was digging the vibe, emotional for the most part
don't know why you would tag it how you did...dope though

I need you to comprehend the truth
Let me defend why too
Just tell me where are you?
I see the light
but I need to see you first
I can’t see you right
Conceived through blurs
There’s no belief through words
It’s too late for actions
past obsessions poured your blood
The craze & passion…
Absorbed your love
^^^dope

10-04-2013, 06:19 PM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	This was cool, had a different vibe due to the short line use not poetic, just...more..expressional...if that's even a word regardless I was digging the vibe, emotional for the most part don't know why you would tag it how you did...dope though I need you to comprehend the truth Let me defend why too Just tell me where are you? I see the light but I need to see you first I can’t see you right Conceived through blurs There’s no belief through words It’s too late for actions past obsessions poured your blood The craze & passion… Absorbed your love ^^^dope __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you