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Very interesting you have a strong understanding of the multiple rhyme scheme and how to use it a good effect. The event horizon - bending iron - spent on rhyming was a good highlight. Enjoyed the mixture of references moving from hades to video games etc. It was all pretty laid back and self-referential while staying aggressive.
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