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BlackHoleFlow - BeEgEe
im the sunlight through the keyhole, the perfect evil
wake up, breathe air, spit bars, and murder people worse then lethal, no regret for past actions on the beat ya know the flows gotta have traction last assassin, i'm sure theres some of you left imma see you when I see you when I come for ya neck half-man.. half-machine.. covered in flesh the flows futuristic, I never cover my steps i walk above Hades like the devil in his prime stand up so straight I must have metal in my spine never went thru evolution, just intelligent design too advanced ya thoughts just ain't relevant to mine way too many attribute points spent on rhyming strength level also thru the roof, i'm bendin iron event horizion, where light, space, and time meet anti-binary, ain't a motherfucker like me if that aint the truth, god reach down and strike me until that day I leave em kneel'n on they right knee |
This was a pretty dope short little piece here. But I do have some complaints.
worse then lethal, no regret for past actions on the beat ya know the flows gotta have traction ^^Ironically on this bar that talks about flow the flow was a little off to me. It's not that big of a deal as I do the same from time to time but try to match the syllables together for a good flow. Besides some minor hiccups here and there on the flow I enjoyed this. Cool little story fella. Go drop some feed on other posts if you expect more feed for yours, and welcome. |
Post moar, feed less..
Don't disappear this time. |
Very interesting you have a strong understanding of the multiple rhyme scheme and how to use it a good effect. The event horizon - bending iron - spent on rhyming was a good highlight. Enjoyed the mixture of references moving from hades to video games etc. It was all pretty laid back and self-referential while staying aggressive.
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this was aiiight though bG, just some cool effortless shit, thats how it comes off to me anyway... alot of the shit was just weightless, but not offensively so, only one line i really liked Quote:
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Someone is foaming because he gets no love
poor lost soul... regardless this was quite the piece had a nice flow to it the vibe is familiar to me. Either way I believe you understand what you are going for and this shines a bit of light on what is yet to come. Nice drop keep writing |
I will give feed on your pieces when you don't format it weird.
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keep your generic insults to a nigga it might actually apply to holmes |
Temper temper
You show me nothing worth reading to prove your skill set |
lool
i think i missed the part where you became someone i needed to prove my skill set to. evidently you overestimate your importance. |
Naive child...carry on...it seems I've touched a nerve because you have no skill...
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the weak always try & project they insecurities on other people.
im comfortable with mine...dont act like you know when clearly you dont edit - my bad on fuckin up the thread bG, #1 |
this was light hearted. it didn't take itself too seriously. and was kinda refreshing to read. I liked it for what it was.
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haven't heard from you in a while. |
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