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10-01-2013, 09:47 AM
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Lol I liked this. I could feel the parts where you were letting off steam. Good emotion in there. This are my favorite iind of drops. The ones that cut out all the rhyme schemes, concepts ect and just concentrate on feelings. Tapping into that is what I think makes you a great writer vs. A ok writer. Good shit mayne.
If you get a chance, this one got burried deep, quick http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=20832
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