A Chess game with King James

[Frank Metts]

Originally Posted by Vividlyvague

Concept, flow very locked in. I loved it. Some of the language wasn't consistent with the gimmick of the piece throughout, but who really cares lol.

This was a pretty cool piece, but I was waiting for the shamalan switch-up TBH...

Great shit, Frank.

I had one in mind but I started keying this while my daughter was napping then sat my phone down and didn't pick it back up till she went to bed for the night so the twist ended up being no twist ... no excuses lol

The language aspect was more of an intelligent successful modern day man taking his game to literal and serious while overlooking the easiest of elements while a pawn so to speak played the game for what it was worth ...

But your the reader and I respect any and all feedback and hope when I have time to drop more you'll come back for seconds ... thank you