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Old 09-13-2013, 03:15 AM   #1
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you fake lying fuck. Hey dad, at night when I cry,
I often wonder how you neglected to mention how life is a lie.
I mean come on, that's pertinent, yes?
Well, now I'm hurting. You're dead.
I know, I know, haven't we heard this verse? In my head.


this is the type of writing that really hits me. it's raw, honest, and poignantly scathing. make this longer
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