... but doctor, I am Pagliacci.
 

Emotional arches. Plucking the strings.
I wrote on your heart with something I'd seen
in a poster. That's art. It's nothing it seems.
Focus the scar for upcoming scenes.
Show me bizarre. Nudge me and wink...
you fake lying fuck. Hey dad, at night when I cry,
I often wonder how you neglected to mention how life is a lie.
I mean come on, that's pertinent, yes?
Well, now I'm hurting. You're dead.
I know, I know, haven't we heard this verse? In my head.
Always nervous. A wreck.
I know it isn't cool. How's a person forget?
Teach me. I'd learn all the steps.
I sip these drinks so memories don't seem so personal. Less
terminal. Check. Pawn to d-8.
So soft, yea she's great. What's wrong with these dames
wanting to talk to me? They must be off, but seem sane.
@PancakeBrah

Awfully strange, like a lobotomy. Brain leaking honesty. Wait,
I'm off in these dazes, while I subconsciously strain. Launching grenades.
Dreams? Naw, each thought's a freeze frame of me palming these
Glocks in each take. Awkwardly pace, back & forth w/ these gauges.
I sawed off a piece. Stop tryna talk to me, I'm already late.
Just want a clean slate... Errr, coffin. I'm authoring fate.
Life's like a quarantined state, just waiting for death...
Aimed at my chest & left my pajama's sleeve stained.

Good shit, Dally.. I liked it

lol

you fake lying fuck. Hey dad, at night when I cry,
I often wonder how you neglected to mention how life is a lie.
I mean come on, that's pertinent, yes?
Well, now I'm hurting. You're dead.
I know, I know, haven't we heard this verse? In my head.


this is the type of writing that really hits me. it's raw, honest, and poignantly scathing. make this longer

dope, deep, simple, everything.

Neighbors verse > dull boys


haha jk. tie, dead tie

both awesome, dead awesome.

post more @ both

This shit was deep in the few words brought
you captured the essence of poetic interpretation
it shines throughout the verse adding a dark feel
a menacing feel at that, so much to so little
write more and add a little rain to the day

Man this was dope. I loved this all the way through. Simple but yet you said so much. Emotion was what really captured my attention.

you fake lying fuck. Hey dad, at night when I cry,I often wonder how you neglected to mention how life is a lie.I mean come on, that's pertinent, yes?Well, now I'm hurting. You're dead.I know, I know, haven't we heard this verse? In my head.Always nervous. A wreck.I know it isn't cool. How's a person forget?

Wow. So dope

seems like something i'd write