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dull boy · 09-06-2013, 09:58 AM

The people around here are so conditioned to view blocks of text in a negative light that they're blind to the benefits. When you drop down with each line it allows people to break your verse into tiny segments, and then verses become nothing but one liners. When I wrote a lot, I liked to have themes carry for multiple lines and even entire verses. Paragraph makes the reader view your verse as a whole. Like you said, it also unbinds you from the simple schemes generally used when people drop down. If you listen to any rapper, they don't finish their bars at the same point in the loop every time. That would get repetitive. Glad I was able to convert you lol

Thanks for saying that. I know a lot of people wouldn't have.

09-06-2013, 09:58 AM	#9
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,054 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345604	The people around here are so conditioned to view blocks of text in a negative light that they're blind to the benefits. When you drop down with each line it allows people to break your verse into tiny segments, and then verses become nothing but one liners. When I wrote a lot, I liked to have themes carry for multiple lines and even entire verses. Paragraph makes the reader view your verse as a whole. Like you said, it also unbinds you from the simple schemes generally used when people drop down. If you listen to any rapper, they don't finish their bars at the same point in the loop every time. That would get repetitive. Glad I was able to convert you lol Thanks for saying that. I know a lot of people wouldn't have.