cidre

brokenhal0 · 08-22-2013, 05:48 AM

im comin out a dimension not quite like yours
drugs sweat out my pours hold your own like a mouse in a cats claw
cosmically flawed but perfected
this like deep breathing something you neglected
hold that thought don't get tempted by the temptress
maybe once in a while but im walkin in the halls of Memphis
on syrain rue im slimy thats true
even if i don't act as grimey as you
connected some truth tuned up with jesus
resurrect infront of little ceasers
it was easter battling the beast in geneva
pure ether thought speed 24 billion miles
to make your heart breathe hard cheese
rugged thumbs grab a dog by the neck and squash fleas

magical delirium symbols contaminated the aquarium
hard wind a scarecrow winceddark matter lives
under the steps connect with people under the stairs
a dove just wept the breeze flung its tears
and the cancer set in amongst those who are dear
we fear the unseen seeing its us makes one dream
im slowly disconnecting the plugs of the coma scene
what a sirius time a firefly dies draconian spine

brokenhal0 · 08-23-2013, 04:51 AM

bump

Wise Wiggles · 08-23-2013, 09:35 PM

lol this was dope as fuck

top 5 doing it here imo

brokenhal0 · 08-24-2013, 04:53 AM

thanks man i really appreciate it you know the deal!!

Geno · 08-26-2013, 09:21 PM

i personaly think you are capable of far superior. but yes, whys speaks the truth, always a good read, very underated writer

08-22-2013, 05:48 AM	#1
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 523 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 3891097	cidre im comin out a dimension not quite like yours drugs sweat out my pours hold your own like a mouse in a cats claw cosmically flawed but perfected this like deep breathing something you neglected hold that thought don't get tempted by the temptress maybe once in a while but im walkin in the halls of Memphis on syrain rue im slimy thats true even if i don't act as grimey as you connected some truth tuned up with jesus resurrect infront of little ceasers it was easter battling the beast in geneva pure ether thought speed 24 billion miles to make your heart breathe hard cheese rugged thumbs grab a dog by the neck and squash fleas magical delirium symbols contaminated the aquarium hard wind a scarecrow winceddark matter lives under the steps connect with people under the stairs a dove just wept the breeze flung its tears and the cancer set in amongst those who are dear we fear the unseen seeing its us makes one dream im slowly disconnecting the plugs of the coma scene what a sirius time a firefly dies draconian spine Last edited by brokenhal0; 02-27-2021 at 04:44 PM.

08-23-2013, 09:35 PM	#3
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	lol this was dope as fuck top 5 doing it here imo __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

08-26-2013, 09:21 PM	#5
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	i personaly think you are capable of far superior. but yes, whys speaks the truth, always a good read, very underated writer __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

08-23-2013, 04:51 AM	#2
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 523 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 3891097	bump

08-24-2013, 04:53 AM	#4
brokenhal0 Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 523 Battle Record: 12-12=4 Champed - AOWL Season IX Rep Power: 3891097	thanks man i really appreciate it you know the deal!!