Galactic Fractals

ZeeDee · 08-22-2013, 05:15 PM

I know we had whatever differences in the league, but this was the pretty nice. Narration had a strong tone and intelligent flow to back it up. I liked the begging with the visual wording you chose and it made it appealing to keep reading and before I knew it, I was at the end..

Turbulence a testament that swirls on connecting as a merger to a nebula
It's blurring what's ahead of us...
Separate the vapor gate and pave the cosmic bed of dust
I cannot touch the hydrogen so wisely tread on, head of lust
Which trusts the comics nucleus, forever shooting spreading luck

that was particularly well worded

08-22-2013, 05:15 PM	#10
ZeeDee Warriors All The Way Baby Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 136 Battle Record: 6-4 Champed Art of Writing League Rep Power: 83708	I know we had whatever differences in the league, but this was the pretty nice. Narration had a strong tone and intelligent flow to back it up. I liked the begging with the visual wording you chose and it made it appealing to keep reading and before I knew it, I was at the end.. Turbulence a testament that swirls on connecting as a merger to a nebula It's blurring what's ahead of us... Separate the vapor gate and pave the cosmic bed of dust I cannot touch the hydrogen so wisely tread on, head of lust Which trusts the comics nucleus, forever shooting spreading luck that was particularly well worded __________________ Welcome to my mind, thoughts that cause contamination By random agents: suspended in violent animation You've entered the corridors of a horror lord Your fate awaits... Prepare for your journey through this world explorer