Cold winter

Exis · 08-19-2013, 04:08 PM

there’s much debating to consider, as the loaded revolver spins
& though times are changing I’m not sure it can be resolved by spring
sins consult the wind, the air shares despair while the heat is on hold
I had all intention to go through with it but since then my feet have gone cold

^^Dope.

What's with suddenly hittin' up this section so often? Anyways...I liked alot of this, had some great imagery and your word usage was nice to say the least...actually it had a bit of everythin' that makes up a tight verse, good shit.

...Stay upwards.

08-19-2013, 04:08 PM	#2
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	there’s much debating to consider, as the loaded revolver spins & though times are changing I’m not sure it can be resolved by spring sins consult the wind, the air shares despair while the heat is on hold I had all intention to go through with it but since then my feet have gone cold ^^Dope. What's with suddenly hittin' up this section so often? Anyways...I liked alot of this, had some great imagery and your word usage was nice to say the least...actually it had a bit of everythin' that makes up a tight verse, good shit. ...Stay upwards.