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Vulgar · 07-21-2013, 10:23 PM

Hai, you're not rusty as far as I can tell.

voila- nothing remains! inject a syringe in a vignette's coagulate veins.
^Original.

phrased a kid and his horse:
"breathe in the corpse- death's but an axiom away".
^not sure what you meant by 'phrased a kid' but I liked this line, calculating the measurements of death is a cool concept.

Colossus line was tough but this was my favorite of the piece:

"step forth and sink your omens in closeted light"

The poet's society has its perks.

keep dewing u

07-21-2013, 10:23 PM	#10
Vulgar Razor-thin derision Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,422 Battle Record: 40-25 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night LIV - Gimmick Battle League (2x) - Write Week II - Art of Writing League - Storytelling And Topical Invitational Tournament - STI - Haiku Writer Challenge - GWL Picture Challenge(2x) Rep Power: 49604320	Hai, you're not rusty as far as I can tell. voila- nothing remains! inject a syringe in a vignette's coagulate veins. ^Original. phrased a kid and his horse: "breathe in the corpse- death's but an axiom away". ^not sure what you meant by 'phrased a kid' but I liked this line, calculating the measurements of death is a cool concept. Colossus line was tough but this was my favorite of the piece: "step forth and sink your omens in closeted light" The poet's society has its perks. keep dewing u